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A land of mysterious objects

This is my narrative from Term 2, 2015. I worked hard on it, and I find writing hard sometimes. I have recorded it using a text-to-speech engine.

Once there was a man called J-Daniel he looked like a man from the jungle who had muscled up arms.He worked in a special place in America ‘LA Fitness Doral’ . One day ran into a magical land of creativity. As he walk he saw alot of people grabing stuff that look new.   

The land look serious and cool at the same time,when he started talking to himself thing that he said pop up.As he walked he discovered that what he said would pop out, so he started to say  things that he couldn’t  afford,like Iphones flash cars etc.

As he said that stuff there was a problem.There were a lot of people dieing.As they were dieing people were yelling at me stop doing that.As I wondered what was happenning a group of different scary people were atacking humans.As he saw them he tryed to get knifes.

As soon as he heard there scary voices he remembered that if you hear scary voices to look and put a cross on you hands and make a Tee.So as he told the people he discovered that there was alot of people alive so he told them what to do.And then I saw  a.....

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