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Sunday, 19 July 2015

My awesome Holiday


Maths goals t3_20_07_15 JAY-DANIEL

Where are you at? I am a 3b, one of my strengths for this subject is understanding the meaning of 1s, 10s and 100s. This subject is something that I have been working on for 2 whole terms and I am proud of this work.
Why are you there? I am here because this is a subject that everyone should know by now and I didn't know this in term one so this was my goal to achieve.
 
Where to next? My next goal that will challenge me is Making sensible estimates and check reasonableness of results.This will have to be my next step for the last 2 terms because it's really challenging.

Reading goals t3_jaydaniel_20_07_15

Where you are at? I am at a 3b, one of my strengths is to consistently read to understand the meaning of the text. I understand this because this is one the goals that I set for the term.

Why are you there? Because I focused on this certain task and I have been working on this main subject at home, school and during free time during the holidays .

Where to next? My next goal for the year is to feel for the characters and situations in the story, I am going to focus on this main subject at free time and any time that is spare. I really want to put this on my strengths box and if I do I will be Happy that I have Succeed the following subject.

Writing goals term 3_20_07_15

Where are you at? I am a 3a. One of my strengths are Organisation I understand this because I always plan my work in my head and then I put my plan through to the text but sometimes I have to take my time and check the text before moving on.  

Why are you there? Because planning is what I do for things like parties,games and writing a story.Another reason why I am there is because when I am organised I feel that my work is easy.  

Where to next?My goal next is Structure I will focus on this task by working hard for it to be in the strengths box.

Tuesday, 23 June 2015

A land of mysterious objects

This is my narrative from Term 2, 2015. I worked hard on it, and I find writing hard sometimes. I have recorded it using a text-to-speech engine.


Once there was a man called J-Daniel he looked like a man from the jungle who had muscled up arms.He worked in a special place in America ‘LA Fitness Doral’ . One day ran into a magical land of creativity. As he walk he saw alot of people grabing stuff that look new.   
The land look serious and cool at the same time,when he started talking to himself thing that he said pop up.As he walked he discovered that what he said would pop out, so he started to say  things that he couldn’t  afford,like Iphones flash cars etc.
As he said that stuff there was a problem.There were a lot of people dieing.As they were dieing people were yelling at me stop doing that.As I wondered what was happenning a group of different scary people were atacking humans.As he saw them he tryed to get knifes.


As soon as he heard there scary voices he remembered that if you hear scary voices to look and put a cross on you hands and make a Tee.So as he told the people he discovered that there was alot of people alive so he told them what to do.And then I saw  a.....